This was quite easy because once I read the red, yellow and green I knew what to add and what to take away.I added one more sentence about what it reminded me of and I also added a link to my blog and I replaced the hi for hello. goodbye.
Wednesday, August 22, 2018
Improving our comments
Ola, bloggers. Welcome back to my blog. I hope you're having a good day because I am. Anyway, today for cybersmart we had to comment on a year 6's blog in our school. Then we went onto a google drawing, where we had to re write our comment and try to make it better. Here is my work.
This was quite easy because once I read the red, yellow and green I knew what to add and what to take away.I added one more sentence about what it reminded me of and I also added a link to my blog and I replaced the hi for hello. goodbye.
This was quite easy because once I read the red, yellow and green I knew what to add and what to take away.I added one more sentence about what it reminded me of and I also added a link to my blog and I replaced the hi for hello. goodbye.
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